I am back and I would like a critique on this poem?

as i was reading you poem i got mixed feelings. i thought hmmm that doesnt go there or why would he/she put that there? but i kept on reading and this poem grew on me i like a lot infact i love it. i like the part where your comparing the bronx and jungle or i think thats what you were going for? Or like the fourth line or paragraph it was my favorite. And maybe you werent try to compare or use a jungle for a simile or metaphor but i liked it a lot. i got mixed feelings in the begining but like i said it grew on me good job! never stop writting it can be an outlet!