Can you please review my English paper on Descartes & mind perceptions? It is due by 2nite and need conclusion

I've read it and i think you're right. Everithing is good but under my poin of view i've found the text quite caothic )maybe too much ideas from past and present, and past again...) I'd like to see some structure (sorry, my english is very bad). You need a Tittle (very important). Also the conclusion "the use of science" it comes in a aprubt way... Well, I don't know. Forget about my opinion. ;) Your text was good!